Fangala the Flying Feline

I thought your first 2 1/2 stanzas were good, but then it fell through. You opinions are not my laws. My opinions are not my laws. I have no laws. ...

Wow! This is really great. Your stanzas are quick, to the point, and flow nicely. You also have a great theme that conjures vivid mental pictures. Um...I can't see anything ...

Hi, yoyo! Look, normally I don't read depressing love poems, but I thought this one was really good. Some of your imagery is especially genius, especially this line: beating, the ...

Hmm. I honestly don't know what to make of this. It's interesting--that's for sure, but I'm not sure if it has real substance. Although I must say that the ending ...

Ayra, you never cease to amaze me. This was a very sweet piece. I wouldn't call it blunt, because sometimes simplicity is better than the most elegant prose. Don't get ...

Bravo. Very nice. I was going to point out that you should spell numbers, but BBB got to it first. I like how you use short paragraphs; that's a good ...

It is nice to have a horse-writer in the neighborhood. :D Sweet story, but it didn't make a lot of sense. I couldn't get a good mental image of the ...

HELlo. Wow, I have, like, nothing bad to say about this. I mean, I have no idea what was going on, but I just GOT it. Dark, passionate imagery and ...

Hey, BBB. Thanks for responding to my critique exchange idea. Anyway, I've been meaning to critique this for a while. It's SO awesome that you're writing a musical to Beautifully ...

Hiya. I decided to critique this one because I was stuck in the San Francisco airport for about six hours. I really wanted to get out and see the town, ...

Not bad, Pawprint. Not bad at all. You always have good ideas. However...soldiers pinching babies? Sorry, but that just seems weird. Also, the whole princess without a voice reminds me ...

Ayra, that was gorgeous! Wow. I really have nothing to say. You have an incredible grasp of imagery and your story flows well. I don't know why people were so ...

AMAZING! I totally agree with Azila that this is the best thing you've written. I really can't see anything wrong with this. It's gentle but exciting and has a great ...

OMG! I love dragons so much. :D However, this is so riddled with grammatical errors that I could hardly read it. I won't bother correcting them, but you should read ...

Oh, wow. I liked this. However, I have a problem with the narrator. It's like a bizarre cross of third and first person. It makes it hard to really get ...